[illiderob]

I like it. I will do some of my stuff there. So on here I will give an example.
Sally Mae:

Marik: Hello.

Sally Mae: Hello.

Marik: How have you been?

Sally Mae: Okay.

Marik: That is good.

Sally Mae: What are you doing?

Marik: I am taking my motorcycle to the shop.

Sally Mae: Why?

Marik: I need to get my oil changed.

Sally Mae: Oh.

Marik: I will see you later.

Sally Mae: Okay. Bye.

Sally Mae then goes to where ever she was headed. It was to the Game Shop. She works there now part time. She goes in then she starts work.
Mr. Moto is in the back. She is stocking the shelves. Then Yugi comes in. Joey and Tristan are with him.

Yugi: Hello.

Sally Mae: Hi there Yugi.

Joey: Hi Sally Mae.

Tristan: Hi Sally Mae.

Sally Mae: What are you doing out here?

Yugi: I thought I might as well drop bye.

Joey: Yeah.

Tristan: Oh.

That was just an example. Tell me what you think.