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Old 09-23-2010, 02:00 AM   #11
Tusethede

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The problem with that, Gatorpit, is that you DO want to use 'you' when speaking persuasively. You want your audience to feel like that paper was written for them and only them, you want to make it intimate, because the closer your audience feels to you, the more likely they are to take what you say into consideration. Also, 'one' does not pack as much punch as 'you'. Here, I'll write an example:
"You walk into the park, unsuspecting, unaware. You close your eyes and breathe deep; the breeze feels nice today. You open your eyes. Approaching you is a man walking a pit bull. Do you freeze in fear, or relax in understanding? [
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