If you wish to engage people in jolting them to debate on why we are at this junction, then you can highlight the ills people do in the 2nd marriage and guide them to the solutions. Your article essentially demonized the whole concept of 2nd marriage. Definitely not the right way to tackle the ignorance of the issue. That has been the case in many issues. Some women have used the same word of Allah and His Rasul to find justifications to shed their niqab, hijab etc. This does not mean that we display the whole institute of 2nd marriage as an ill. If you feel that 2nd marriage in time of Rasulullah (by his own practice) and by the practice of all the sahaba, was exactly how a 2nd marriage of today ought to be, then please edit your article and add in a paragraph giving praise to those who emulate that life of Rasulullah and sahaba. While you highlight the ills of society, also highlight that cure for many of other ills of the society lay in the sunnah of 2nd marriage as well. All that needs to be done is educate on how to conduct a 2nd marriage. That should be easier than demonising the 2nd marriage totally.