[LeviBrawn]

well max, i agree that your kiai needs some improving... lol Maybe if you have the "musical magic touch" you could try to kiai a specific note because your kiai is a bunch of unknown blabing with a wide variety of sounds that don't have a good connection between them (my opinion). If you really like the basic words of your kiai, keep them but you should clear all the background sounds that bothers you and clear your voice. Ergh, my explanation makes no sense...

I'll give an exemple. If you listen to the radio and you hear some noisy "scrrrr"/"zztt" background, you play with the buttons because you want to hear a clear voice/music. In a kiai case, the buttons are the level of air that passes through your throat. Try to control that and your kiai will be much better... anyway, if you don't understand at all what I am saying, just ask me before practice. And don't forget my game.... >_< I hope this will help you