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Sarah - remember your paper is on your insights and beliefs. It is well written and articulates your interpretation of the information you have. As you correct your draft dont digress from your original opinion or it cease to be your paper reflecting you, and just another cookie cutter bore. You will find that most professors, reguardless the political view, will be positive towards your essays if they demonstrate insightfulness and a fresh point of view making them engaging to read. I find yours very much so