Well, after reading the "paper" and the responses..This is a college paper? Sure isn't very long. I also agree that the jabs at Bush jr/Sr are a little simplistic and shortsighted. All in all, it is an ok start but you need a lot of work. 1/3 of your paper is a definition. Keep in mind that just because the prof thinks something doesn't mean he/she is right and you have to agree in order to get an A. Yes the topic is very leading and asks you to provide evidence/opinion to support an opinion not a fact but, you can provide information from both sides in the body of your paper and provide your personal judgement of the facts in your conclusion and still warrent an A whether you agree or disagree.