[Frogzlovzy]

Not bad. And by not bad, I mean in comparison to mainstream acts, which is what I have to compare it to.

Musically, it is apparent your band possesses some talent. I do like the lyrics and the guitar work is rightly placed in the overall mix. I also like the use of transitions in the song during the buildup.

Overall, the song badly needs polish. This cut is not something I would have shared if I were fronting a band. First, you say you are not into trends. However, that should never be an excuse for not polishing your work. The opening held my attention, but was mostly due to the guitar. The vocals throughout were a distraction, mainly due to tonal wavering and lack of direction. I would have liked to hear the voice strained to contrast the brooding guitar in the intro.

While the buildup and transitions are nice, their execution left me behind, songwise. Akin to throwing cold water on me while sleeping - maybe that was your intent - but for me it was a distraction.

The vocals found some direction in the bridge and refrain, but the wavering was again distracting.

I would very much like to hear a polished cut of this song. I think the writing is good. The chord choices agree with the mood of the song.

Thanks for sharing this. [thumbup]