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**Plaumpholavup** · 05-12-2011, 08:35 PM

Assalamualaikum,

LEARN ENGLISH LANGUAGE THROUGH ISLAMIC STUDIES:
The definition of the phrase ''Al Ashartu Mubashirun'' given below has been written by somebody on a website.There is something wrong with all these sentences.I would like willing Sunniforum members to go through these sentences and then make corrections and post the corrected sentences.
I Will be explaining the basic rules of writing English with reference to each post.The corrected version will also be posted for clarification.

''Al Ashartu Mubashirun:
Ten companions which were given assurance of entering Paradise.
They included Abu Bakr, Umar, Uthman, Ali, Abdur Rahman ibn Awf, Abu Ubaydah ibn al-Jarrah,
Talhah ibn Ubaydullah, Zubayr ibn al-Awwam, Sa'd ibn Abi Waqqas, and Sa'id ibn Zayd.''

LEARN ENGLISH LANGUAGE THROUGH FUN

Customer to the Waiter: Get a roasted chicken.
Waiter: OK, sir!
The waiter gets the roasted chicken and places it on the table.
Finding the chicken rather sooty in colour the customer says (complainingly): Oh! The chicken looks horrible; remove it from the table. I want the manager.
The waiter replies: ‘’Sir, the Manager is not on our menu.’’

What is wrong with this piece of conversation?

The only thing wrong I can see wrong with the passage is the use of speech marks for some speech and the lack of speech for other parts of the passage.

05-12-2011, 08:35 PM	#4
Plaumpholavup Join Date Oct 2005 Posts 516 Senior Member	Assalamualaikum, LEARN ENGLISH LANGUAGE THROUGH ISLAMIC STUDIES: The definition of the phrase ''Al Ashartu Mubashirun'' given below has been written by somebody on a website.There is something wrong with all these sentences.I would like willing Sunniforum members to go through these sentences and then make corrections and post the corrected sentences. I Will be explaining the basic rules of writing English with reference to each post.The corrected version will also be posted for clarification. ''Al Ashartu Mubashirun: Ten companions which were given assurance of entering Paradise. They included Abu Bakr, Umar, Uthman, Ali, Abdur Rahman ibn Awf, Abu Ubaydah ibn al-Jarrah, Talhah ibn Ubaydullah, Zubayr ibn al-Awwam, Sa'd ibn Abi Waqqas, and Sa'id ibn Zayd.'' LEARN ENGLISH LANGUAGE THROUGH FUN Customer to the Waiter: Get a roasted chicken. Waiter: OK, sir! The waiter gets the roasted chicken and places it on the table. Finding the chicken rather sooty in colour the customer says (complainingly): Oh! The chicken looks horrible; remove it from the table. I want the manager. The waiter replies: ‘’Sir, the Manager is not on our menu.’’ What is wrong with this piece of conversation? The only thing wrong I can see wrong with the passage is the use of speech marks for some speech and the lack of speech for other parts of the passage.
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