I like yours, very nice. Last year, at my family reunion, I gave the blessing of the food, since my family don't know that I'm eclectic in my beliefs; mostly pagan/Wiccan, but I do draw from Christian beliefs, too; I gave a general blessing thanking the Deity and Creator of all things. Just say what feels good and whatever is placed on your heart to say, and things should go well. Have Fun! Blessed Be