Only for such a wonderful person! http://www.80sxchange.com/forums/ima...lies/smile.gif

You know, that's real balladry right there. It's easy to imagine Madonna singing it, or Steve Perry taking a crack at it, or maybe Pat Benatar...have you submitted this and any other works you have? I just love the emotion, and I think singers would, too.

Sincerely,

John "outofplacechild" Kilduff

I Am Tired Of Loving This Way
 

I am tired of loving this way

I am tired of watching me hurt you
I am tired of being the tear drops on your face
I a m tired of loving this way.

I know your every weakness i can find one in everything you say
I am tried of loving this way.... .

I am not what you really need
I am not the one in your dreams
I can see it in your eyes this isn't the way it should feel
I dont' know how we got here
Love is no longer applied
If that is just how it its
can we go on like this?
Baby what do you say?

I am tired of loving this way....

I'll set your heart free and if your mine you will come flying back someday but i am tried of loving this way!

Well i am taken you with me...
Like a wound in my heart you will have your place

Thanks but it is a song,, one of my favorites actually.

Maybe it's just a poem, but it tells things that are rooted on real life ! it's more than just a poem !

TGND " Ya only begin to understand life that it's already over ! "

Nice poem Milani. Emotional and eloquent.

Always the sweetyhttp://www.80sxchange.com/forums/ima...lies/smile.gif

That was great! Geeze is there somthing about you that isn't great? What a long list of amazing things about you; looks, personality,and a brain! http://www.80sxchange.com/forums/ima...es/biggrin.gif

Wow Milani! I really like this poem a lot. There's a lot of emotion in it and it is beautifully phrased. Good job. http://www.80sxchange.com/forums/ima...ilies/wink.gif

*CLAPS*
Bravo bravo http://www.80sxchange.com/forums/ima...ies/hammer.gif

*gives you a rose* @-->-->---
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