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Old 11-15-2005, 08:00 AM   #1
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Kollywoodla thaan edutha kathayaye thirumba thirumba copy adikiraangannaa..

Inga oru aal "Kollywoodfan" endru paer vachikittu, ade maathiri sethu pona oru kathaya snehava vachi eduthirukaango..

Kollywood eppa thaan thirunthumo..(obviously I did not mean any kollywoodfan )
No creativity... Nice try, selva!! Next time, come back with a story...People are having fun...so don't be a party-pooper!!
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Old 12-13-2005, 11:12 AM   #2
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Default WHOSE SCREENPLAY? OURS!! CREATE ONE!!
Hmm..so diverting from just discussing films and actors...why don't we create film stories of our own? One always pops up in my head occasionally, so I figured that others probably have creations of their own too...

People can create various storylines, it's ok if they're influenced or inspired by real films, but the overall story should be kinda original..and then other hubbers can provide feedback!!

* Optional: they can include the cast, crew, and one can even insert songs from real movies that would suit their situations so we can get a feel...

So it's time to test our creativity!!!!
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Old 12-13-2005, 01:02 PM   #3
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So here is a story in my mind for a while

k...So...

Hmm...so a groom is going to meet a girl of his parent's choice after seeing her pic (Sneha), there he bumps into one Sneha and immediately sees the other Sneha sitting down...Right, so they're twins...So everything goes well and marriage plans are confirmed...

As time goes on and through his visits to their household, the groom finds out that the other twin is actually older and the reason that she wasn't getting married was because she had cancer (I know, cliche, what to do? ).

But as he starts to mingle with her and talk to her, he is impressed by her positive outlook on life...and he slowly falls in love with her rather than the other twin who he is engaged too (hey, it happens!!)

One day, the cancer Sneha faints and has to be taken to the hospital...There she tells everyone that the only wish she has and the only reason life is still hanging on is to see her sister's wedding...-INTERMISSION!!!!

Only leads to another...eventually the cancer Sneha comes to know of the groom's (thru a photo or diary or something, i don't know) and the groom decides not to tell her about his love, but he conveys everything to a sidekick (let's say, Vivek!) and she doesn't tell him he knows either.

The groom has some sentimental words...there is no way on Earth she can ever be happy with me knowing that she ruined her sister's marriage...and I want her last moments of life to be happy...and the marriage happens. Before he leaves with the groom, married Sneha, he leaves his special ring for the cancer Sneha...

The last scene, the cancer Sneha tells him to take care of her sister and waves, and went the car takes off, she opens to palm of her hand to reveal the special ring he left behind for her...

Closing Credits!! Whaddaya think...Comments? Any constructive criticism??
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Old 12-13-2005, 01:13 PM   #4
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typical...we need a fresh story, not typical massalas, but I like your ideas..

(No songs, just BGM soundtrack)

Story: 2 lovers come to know one's feelings. Suddenly a devastating event happens to the groom, leaving the bride in distress. The groom gives a promise though. A promise to be fulfilled so his soul could rest in peace. Bride does his wish, but bumps into a replica of the groom. Chaos emerges.
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Old 12-13-2005, 01:19 PM   #5
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Hmmm...
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Old 12-13-2005, 03:16 PM   #6
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this is a good launch pad for aspiring screenplay writers/directors...No seriously!!
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Old 12-13-2005, 04:43 PM   #7
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hmm not bad kwfan.

A lot matters on how the movie is taken(not just the story). Without senseless 3rd rated songs, or sick comedy, every movie would be a feast for the eyes.

I liked ur climax (though it reminds me of 'SA RI GA MA PA THA NEEE')
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Old 12-13-2005, 04:47 PM   #8
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good thread kollywoodfan
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Old 12-13-2005, 05:16 PM   #9
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typical...we need a fresh story, not typical massalas, but I like your ideas..

(No songs, just BGM soundtrack)

Story: 2 lovers come to know one's feelings. Suddenly a devastating event happens to the groom, leaving the bride in distress. The groom gives a promise though. A promise to be fulfilled so his soul could rest in peace. Bride does his wish, but bumps into a replica of the groom. Chaos emerges.
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Old 12-13-2005, 05:36 PM   #10
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I have lot of stories but Iam sorry veliya sonna appuram copy adichiduvaanga
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Old 12-13-2005, 05:38 PM   #11
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apo enaku pm panungo

I have lot of stories but Iam sorry veliya sonna appuram copy adichiduvaanga
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Old 12-13-2005, 05:42 PM   #12
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apo enaku pm panungo

Originally Posted by swathy I have lot of stories but Iam sorry veliya sonna appuram copy adichiduvaanga
ah aasai dosai appalam vadai neenga veliya solli periya aal aayiteenganna enna pandradhu
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Old 12-14-2005, 01:59 AM   #13
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Pavum the sneha who actually married the groom...she has to live with a guy who was/is in love with another girl.They begin their married life based on lies..what hope does their marriage have?She is the real victim here IMHO!
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Old 12-14-2005, 02:06 AM   #14
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Pavum the sneha who actually married the groom...she has to live with a guy who was/is in love with another girl.They begin their married life based on lies..what hope does their marriage have?She is the real victim here IMHO!
just like the sneha in "parthiban kanavu" ...
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Old 12-14-2005, 02:21 AM   #15
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U gotit Pras
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Old 12-14-2005, 10:53 AM   #16
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Originally Posted by ssanjinika Pavum the sneha who actually married the groom...she has to live with a guy who was/is in love with another girl.They begin their married life based on lies..what hope does their marriage have?She is the real victim here IMHO!
just like the sneha in "parthiban kanavu" ... that's the inspiration part
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Old 12-14-2005, 08:35 PM   #17
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OK why not me give it a try!Tis my first attempt.

Title:The Magic Pot!

Cast

Cast will be updated as story moves on!

Music: Harris Jeyaraj

Production:Avenger Arts Pvt.Ltd

Genre: Thriller

1st shot:
Location: A heavy traffic packed road in Chennai.
Sounds of horns of all vehicles,light and heavy boom into ur ears.The camera moves to and fro,up and down and around the jammed road.People are in a hurry but the traffic doesnt seem to clear even by an inch.A childs cry is heard in the background.The child is hungry and is crying for food.Amidst the frenzy the camera moves towards a mysterious pot(mann paanai).The strangest and largest pot that u wudve ever seen.(perfect start for a mystery).The camera moves around and around the pot(accompanied by a lot of sound effects).One thing is peculiar about the pot,it has a small shallow hole at the front end,but nothing seems to be leaking.Suddenly a gun appears and rests over the pot.And the pot is covered by falling blue curtains(HJs thiller theme musics everywhere).
TO the viewers astonishment the cmaera is raised.The viewers are shocked to see that the pot has no neck,but a gigantic pillar stood in its place.The pillar is also covered tightly by an extension of the same curtain.
The camera continues on its way upwards.There is a head on top of the pillar (the neck connecting the pillar and the head seems to be missing)..............surprise..................
Captain Vijaykanth is b4 you
The camera shifts back to the pot

These words appear from nowhere

STORY,SCREENPLAY,DIALOGUE,DIRECTION

Avenger!!!!!


Will be updated!
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Old 12-14-2005, 10:39 PM   #18
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I liked only one part of it....

These words appear from nowhere

STORY,SCREENPLAY,DIALOGUE,DIRECTION

Avenger!!!!!
post script: shhhhhhhhh avenger ...gimme a role too (may be as heroine's mom)... and the movie SHOULD TAKE A DRAMATIC TURN WITH MY ENTRY....... (all would leave the seat, turn back and go home )
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Old 12-14-2005, 11:04 PM   #19
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Only if someones there in the seats can they getup.VJkanth will drive away most.Rest of the fools will run away after the first shot.
I dont target the common man.I target mosquitoes,house-flies and other insects.




I liked only one part of it....

These words appear from nowhere

STORY,SCREENPLAY,DIALOGUE,DIRECTION

Avenger!!!!!
post script: shhhhhhhhh avenger ...gimme a role too (may be as heroine's mom)... and the movie SHOULD TAKE A DRAMATIC TURN WITH MY ENTRY....... (all would leave the seat, turn back and go home )
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Old 12-14-2005, 11:23 PM   #20
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Kollywoodla thaan edutha kathayaye thirumba thirumba copy adikiraangannaa..

Inga oru aal "Kollywoodfan" endru paer vachikittu, ade maathiri sethu pona oru kathaya snehava vachi eduthirukaango..

Kollywood eppa thaan thirunthumo..(obviously I did not mean any kollywoodfan )
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