[WeissVine]

I wasn't sure where to put this, so I'll put it in here, If it needs to be moved, then feel free.

It's one of my better songs, It's supposed be rapcore. So feedback is appreciated, And if you want to see more of my stuff, I'll gladly post it.

Listen

by Tim Fairley

People think i'm a little crazy,
Fuckin bitches can't faze me,
My story of a lot of bullshit,
Listen, shut the fuck up and sit.

I'm a little bit out of my mind,
Sit back down, you're outa line,
Don't get up, be a good bitch,
You about to wind up in the ditch.

I told you to sit down,
Stay the fuck down,
Don't get up until I tell you,
Shut up and listen.

I'm a maniac on prozak,
Hit the fucking road Jack,
Think you know me?
You can't even see me.

Motherfuckers want to be me,
Faggots can't stand me,
Get down on both knees,
BOW FUCKING DOWN TO ME!

I told you to sit down,
Stay the fuck down,
Don't get up until I tell you,
Shut up and listen.

This is the story of my dream,
I didn't lie, I'll make you scream,
Cry me a river bitch, I don't care,
Fuck with me, thats a dare.

I told you to SIT DOWN,
Stay the FUCK DOWN,
Don't get up until I tell you,
Shut up and listen.

[doogiehoussi]

Wow. How incredibly generic. Sorry, man, but if you're counting on music for a living, then I'd reconsider.

If I were you, I'd listen to me. Really, fucking listen, cause that shit is less original than bubble gum.

[Queueftof]

sorry, but agreed. The lyrics are incredibly simpilistic...but that's the rapcore way I'd imagine.

Peace.