Originally posted by Bretty:
Knock what isn't doing as well as the others out and then make it a semi final. Before having a final. like King Of The Ring? http://www.discussworldissues.com/fo...ilies/cool.png
whatever happend to KOTR?

Ha I found it. I wondered if you had posted this yet and I have found it. I voted just to let you know.

Knock what isn't doing as well as the others out and then make it a semi final. Before having a final.

Vote for GRs best lyric writer
 

Here are the lyrics i recieved, the writers will remain secret till the results are done and i'd appreciate it if the writers didn't say which ones are theirs to avoid biased voting.

"Broken Heart and Forgotten Dreams"

Broken hearts and forgotten dreams
Fade away, remain unseen.
Losing my faith in human kind.
My faith that I’ll never find again. Find again.

Spilling open at the seams
Stick back together by any means.
Spinning out of control
Trying to get back the feelings that were stolen.

I take this trip down memory road
Destroyed milestones and tattered pictures are its litter.
I can’t say everything’s ok.
Because everything isn’t ok. Isn’t ok.

Spilling open at the seams
Stick back together by any means.
Spinning out of control
Trying to get back the feelings that were stolen.

Broken hearts and forgotten dreams.
They’ll never mend
They’ll never be remembered.
Lost faith in human kind.
Something that will never be recovered.

Spilling open at the seams
Stick back together by any means.
Spinning out of control
Trying to get back the feelings that were stolen.
Spilling open at the seams
Stick back together by any means.
Spinning out of control
Trying to get back the feelings that were stolen.
Feelings that were stolen.
Feelings that were stolen.
Feelings that were stolen.


Get use to feeling this way...is what they say
Life isnt perfect,dont stress about things that are beyond your control
It's hard to be happy about continuing when you have nothing to show
I fought for everything,now I wonder if its really for something.,.
I bow my head in sadness asking for forgivness...
I'm sorry for what i'm about to do...
I'm sorry I just couldnt help but fail you..
I cant keep up this lie,it's killing me from the inside
Face full of nothing but pain,Tears fall like rain..
am I insane? how do you hide all your pain?
Would saying goodbye really help with the fight?
and does somebody asking you how you continue...make it alright?

"Twisted Love"

Steal my smile for yourself
I know your feelings are all you care about
I'm so weak minded with out a doubt
My selfishness this world can do without.
I didnt know it was suppose to hurt this much
All I ever got out of love was broken trust
Isnt there more? guess you can never really heal my sore
Only thing I let get close is the blade...
and let that carve away all of my pain..
Oh you can try to bring me back
But I believe I've already fallin off the track
Just what do you want from me?
You've driven yourself inside and planted hate
Now you want to know if i'm okay
Just Take down everything I surround
Kill and drowned until you dont even hear a sound
I see your desire in your eyes
and it's to destroy me with your damn lies
Corrupt my feelings again and watch me die from within..


"I wonder"


i'm so alone, and i whine
to another mindless face, of mine
to my ego, I apologize
i've forgotten you, behind

i wonder, would it even really matter
if I, was your step ladder
to another state of mind

and i wonder, would you notice if i was no longer?
or be content to find, another

so repeatitive, and weak
I cannot speak the words, i seek
but if you could, please find
a way to stop this cycle of mine

i wonder, would you even know that i'm him
the one, you say you want, but you pretend

and i wonder, would i even have to wonder
if your superficial traits were, no longer

i'm so alone, and i whine
i'll be just another face in time
to my loved ones, i apologize
i have left you all, behind

and i wonder...

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These Broken Bones Can't work alone...can you make me understand teach me what it's like to walk to again.These Past Mistakes I can't comtemplate everything thing inside my head looking back I should be dead my epitaph already read so i'll take the condemned road home...

Cause you cant go back on promises you made life is getting crazy we never can agree its people like you its people like me we get brought down the minority.

These Broken Homes can't work alone can help me understand?Give me a reason to love again.These past headaches i've come to hate carry cries inside my head looking back I should be dead my epitaph already read my terms of life already said so i'll take the condemned road home...think i'll take the condemned road home.

Cause you cant go back on promises you made life is getting crazy we never can agree its people like you its people like me we get brought down the minority...(music fades)

(bridge)and you'll always go back on promises you made life is getting hazzy hate is what we breathe its people like you it's people like me we get brought down the minority...think i'll take the condemned road home...think i'll take the condemned road home...said i'll take the condemned road home...


Death Is The Answer

Verse 1

Tear the stitches off your face,
Blistered and scarred, what a disgrace,
Beaten and bloody, still the same,
Hell has come to take your name

Verse 2

Still looking death in the eye,
Making handicapped children cry,
For fear you cannot bear,
The poison in my breath polutes the air

Chorus

Murder is the sickness of a psychopath,
Death is the outcome of my wrath,
No mercy, no fate, life is what I hate,
Death is the answer to your prayers

Verse 3

Blood is pouring down your flesh,
Covered in bruises, what a mess,
Crying in pain, angered by hate,
Better run away, don't wanna be late

Verse 4

Take a knife, put it to your wrist,
Carving names, making a list,
Take a gun, put it to your head,
Pull the trigger, now you're dead

Chorus

Murder is the sickness of a psychopath,
Death is the outcome of my wrath,
No mercy, no fate, life is what I hate,
Death is the answer to your prayers


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ok people those are the lyrics now vote!! vote like you've never voted before

I just realised something. 2 songs are posted under 1 title.

"Spinning out of control
Trying to get back the feelings that were stolen.
Feelings that were stolen.
Feelings that were stolen.
Feelings that were stolen."

That's the end of that song. You can tell because the style of writing after those lines are completely different but it goes on to another song/poem which isn't available to be voted for. Just thought I'd say.
Also Susche when is this going to end?

[ January 22, 2005, 10:32 PM: Message edited by: Bretty ]

Originally posted by Bretty:
I just realised something. 2 songs are posted under 1 title.

"Spinning out of control
Trying to get back the feelings that were stolen.
Feelings that were stolen.
Feelings that were stolen.
Feelings that were stolen."

That's the end of that song. You can tell because the style of writing after those lines are completely different but it goes on to another song/poem which isn't available to be voted for. Just thought I'd say.
Also Susche when is this going to end? if it ended now, there would be ties, so not now