[Suvaxal]

The more I hear the original versions, the more I wonder where she got the ideas for the songs from. The original doesn't seem sad/wanting to me, at all. The melody is pretty much lifted in most places, but the mood is different.

Also, this:

Did we begin
without knowing it
to find fault with every gift
Then that was when
the Blame began
What were once 2 forces joined
in Fearlessness ...just fits perfectly a crumbling relationship, one with a sense of history and weight behind.

Nicely done!