Hi Ryuu-San If you genuinely are a 12 year-old Girl, then I think that your poetry is very good and you are obviously inspired... just hope that you don't set your expectations incorrectly and end up getting hurt... My daughter is 12 and I can just imagine her in that situation... If you are not really a 12 year-old Girl... then I reserve judgement...! There was a Kendoka named Ryuu... Whose poems expressed love so true. When hit on her Men... She said 'Do that again... ...and I'll give my young heart up to you...!' The Limerick... aaah the Irish Haiku!!! cheers