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Old 04-01-2006, 07:00 AM   #18
Stivenslivakovishhhs

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If people are sending you hate mail through email geeunit, then just remove your email address from your profile or change it. If it's through PM's, then just don't read your PM's. Better yet, stop doing things that people may find irritating. Just calm down, take it easy, and learn.

Oh, and Issac:



Well, the few grammar mistakes I see here:

"Oh Hi ,"

Seems that it would become, "Oh, hi," You don't need a second capital unless it's a proper noun and all that jazz. You also need that comma in the beginning after, "Oh."

As for: "Did you pass your grade 2 english ?" There is an extra space between the end of the last word and the question mark.

"Did you pass your grade 2 english?" Would be appropriate.

And: "Do you think everyone is going to give a sh*t about you with your
"HEY ..! i am 13 and i don't care about anything except MEMEMEMEME'' attitude?"

The fourth word in there, "everyone," is incorrectly used. It would be, "anyone." I'm not sure about your use of past-tense. "going," could be, "gives," but you'd have to drop the "is," and change the "to," to "a."

I won't comment on your quotation since I haven't seen the source.

"Appearently , NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO."

Appearently is not a word. In this case I believe you mean, "Apparently." An exclamation mark instead of a period is recommended after, "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO."

"Here is a sentence you can even understand :"

The colon needs to be moved back a space. This sentence seems to be awkwardly formed to me, "Here, this is a sentence even YOU can understand:" works better.

"WE GET IT , YOU ARE GAY AND retarded , STFU !"

There are extra spaces after your words and your punctuation. Also it is an excessive use of capital letters, why do you suddenly say "retarded" normally, after yelling the rest of the sentence?

"Thank you , have a nice day PUNK.."

This has the same problem with punctuation. You also wouldn't end that statement with two periods, which I construe as an attempt to create an ellipse. An exclamation mark or a period would be sufficient.

So uh, did you pass your 6th grade english? Some of these were really common mistakes, not what I'd expect to see from someone insulting anothers grammar. I count over ten errors in that post.
Hi Denker-san,

BTW, you missed an error in Issac-san's post.

"english" should be capitalised like this: English.

Kaoru
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