Hi Tango-san, I read the whole thing, and it looks very good to me. The only thing I'd suggest is to be clear about where to buy online kendo equipment. You only wrote: and you didn't mention any reputable online places except your sensei's shop. So, for the new students who want to buy online, that won't help them. They might not realise that buying on e-bay or at a place like Century Karate for example, are not good places to buy shinai and that. I suggest that you put in links to the reputable online kendo shops there as well as your sensei's shop.(So nice he's got one right near you guys!) This way, you know the new students have access to decent equipment online as well as offline and will have bought quality stuff. Otherwise, I think it was really well written! Kaoru