View Single Post
Old 11-13-2009, 06:32 PM   #3
Lyikmcmb

Join Date
Oct 2005
Posts
480
Senior Member
Default
As it's a new brand you've well, fabricated, I would've thought it'd be better for the advert to concentrate more on the cereal itself, rather than took about it for the last few seconds or so. It just felt ineffective.
Thanks for the feedback

Yeah, I have another advert to do in a group next time, so hopefully I can improve on this. This was just for a pass grade so I think it's ok for a first attempt.
Lyikmcmb is offline


 

All times are GMT +1. The time now is 11:51 AM.
Copyright ©2000 - 2012, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
Design & Developed by Amodity.com
Copyright© Amodity