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With the some experience I have with editing and the current classes I am taking on this kind of thing, I liked how you made different shots of the kitchen appliances. The only problem I had with it is it really wouldn't be believable as a commercial. Especially for that product. Because all that happens is that you do the different shots and then it goes to the graphic of the cereal for a second without really explaining the whole hub bub about it. It wouldn't make me want to buy it lol because for that split second, I wouldn't remember what it was called.