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**Hankie** · 07-30-2009, 12:28 AM

Can't think that without thinking, "how much for the professional video"?

I get the intent. But it was a weird cross between an instructional and a benefits piece. Are you going to tell me about quarks? How to build an accelerator? Or tell me about the benefits you create for society?

Pick one. Focus.

I get that there's a lot of story to tell. But they would have been better served doing two, no, three short, focused pieces, all 5 min. or less. They'd get a lot more mileage out of it that way, too.

With some slight script adjustments, and radically different editing, this would be much more effective.

07-30-2009, 12:28 AM	#5
Hankie Join Date Oct 2005 Posts 593 Senior Member	Can't think that without thinking, "how much for the professional video"? I get the intent. But it was a weird cross between an instructional and a benefits piece. Are you going to tell me about quarks? How to build an accelerator? Or tell me about the benefits you create for society? Pick one. Focus. I get that there's a lot of story to tell. But they would have been better served doing two, no, three short, focused pieces, all 5 min. or less. They'd get a lot more mileage out of it that way, too. With some slight script adjustments, and radically different editing, this would be much more effective.
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