[Sx1qBli0]

sorry about the double post guys but my (insane) kendoka mates nagging me to post this..........
here it goes:

The lost kendoka,
misunderstood,
not known.......

So how would your heart bleed,
if your love was in,
and first true love,
lay in love of kendo?

You may laugh,
you may smile,
but my heart will continue,
and my feelings never extinguish,
like a feeble flame,
thought strong,
but so easily changed,
this is the true love,
that stays like rock inside us all,
glowing.....

And although in your naiivity,
one day,
you will all learn,
and understand,
that everyone of us will love,
and the eternal mountain stands inside us all.

for kate, so you will come to understand,
the eternal mountain that lives inside.

[mymnarorump]

I hope this happens to me when I start Kendo!

If you play video games and like baseball, you are perfect!

Edit: In like, 10 years, LOL.

[paulaglober]

Wow... quite impressive! Keep it up Ryuu (ie your kendo and poetry) and all the best with this fella that you seem to fancy!!

Oh... I like your haiku too Berugijin... I can't understand why no one has commended you yet.

[ebBPxIai]

Hit me with your rhythm stick,
Hit me, hit me
Hit me slow and hit me quick,
Hit me, hit me, hit me

????????????????

nice, yet slightly disturbing...

[FUNALA]

You guys are getting disgusting... hahaha... heh, guys... *shakes head*

Kaoru

[ZonaPutaX]

Hit me with your rhythm stick,
Hit me, hit me
Hit me slow and hit me quick,
Hit me, hit me, hit me

????????????????

[CiccoineFed]

Thankyou Jacynth-san,
your comments are much appreciated.
Her is the next installment of the poem:

I, the lost kendoka,
Entered dojo small,
looked into his sparkling eyes,
and bled inside,
knowing that i could never tell,
would never tell,
he could never know,
may nerver know,
how i bleed.

But maybe one day,
he shall give me courage,
and he shall know,
the truth.

[johnstylet]

Hi Ryuu-San

If you genuinely are a 12 year-old Girl, then I think that your poetry is very good and you are obviously inspired... just hope that you don't set your expectations incorrectly and end up getting hurt... My daughter is 12 and I can just imagine her in that situation...

If you are not really a 12 year-old Girl... then I reserve judgement...!

There was a Kendoka named Ryuu...
Whose poems expressed love so true.
When hit on her Men...
She said 'Do that again...
...and I'll give my young heart up to you...!'

The Limerick... aaah the Irish Haiku!!!

cheers

huh.... call me stupid, but I didn't know that Limerick's were originally from Ireland...

[weightpillsnow]

there once was a kendoka called Jude
when i gi keikod with her she put me in a horny mood
i saw her eyes through those grills
and my crotch suffered spills
till i took off her men and saw she was a dude

This is so wrong!..wrong wrong wrong wrong!!! LOL why'd ya get horny in the first place???wouldn't 'she' be a wee bit too big fer a girl???

BTW..how do we know this isn't a true story? ok ok..just kidd'

[smokeberly]

"reflections of a kendoka in love before being smacked on the head"

[Prosocorneliay]

i'm trying to figure out if the poem is supposed to mean something else. hmmm

~taganahan

[BloofPailafum]

There once was a kendoka called Zee
she was so hot everyone crept in the toilet wen she wanted to pee
She had large breasts that her do couldnt cover
and everyone in the dojo wanted to be her lover
untill they smelt the inside of her Gi

Oh dear, oh dear, oh dear....!

[zuhraliyana]

oooooh, he's a she.... (right?)

this would be a good thread for haikus... anyone a bassho-fan? (not that I'm an expert at haikus, but him I know)

[accotMask17]

i'm trying to figure out if the poem is supposed to mean something else. hmmm

~taganahan

I was about to say "uhmm thats a bit GAY", but I changed my mind after a read in Ryuu's profile. Argh.

[Laqswrnm]

hmmm...; should that one be called romantic because he talks about "her" eyes or just plain perverted because they get him horny during a keiko...
By the way, this Jude must've had a real shrieky kiai...

[Cyclicymn]

There once was a kendoka called Zee
she was so hot everyone crept in the toilet wen she wanted to pee
She had large breasts that her do couldnt cover
and everyone in the dojo wanted to be her lover
untill they smelt the inside of her Gi

[Enrivaanonock]

Hit me with your rhythm stick,
Hit me, hit me
Hit me slow and hit me quick,
Hit me, hit me, hit me

????????????????

Wow. Why can't they write music like that anymore?

Hank.

[eljugadordepoquer]

To Ryuu,

How many Men did you receive last time?

[Spalax]

I am the lost kendoka,
overwelmed in love,
lost in his eyes,
permanantly entangled in his
happiness......
renendered helpless by he,
i the lost kendoka
have found him.

His kiai the key to my heart,
the small twinkle,
in his wide eyes,
as he smiles across the dojo.

I the lost kendoka
Rendered helpless by he....

[zdoppiklonikaa]

[QUOTE=ryuu]Thankyou Jacynth-san,
your comments are much appreciated.
QUOTE]

Hey Ryuu-San... just to let you know that my Limerick was not meant to be disrespectful... Hope that you didn't interpret it that way...

cheers