[robinthesearchmasterh]

Give her a break guys. I must say she has a talent..

[SergeyLisin]

I the lost kendoka......
I must confess this is no ordinary poetry,
this is not just a deception of feelings,
created for a readers enjoyment,
This is how i have felt,
since first joining my dojo,
and meeting the one i long for so much,

here i m telling you what makes me,
and my kendo.

He inspires me,
he helps me,
he delights me,
and he gives me an incentive to work the hardest i can so that
maybe one day,
he may return my feelings,
and i will be the best i can be

[gypearteday]

huh.... call me stupid, but I didn't know that Limerick's were originally from Ireland...

Hi nikolaj-San... I would never presume to call you stupid, but yes, Limericks did originate in Ireland (In Limerick I believe...)...

cheers

[anatmob]

Ooh poetry, lovely! My attempt:

Watch the far mountain
Try to seme for suki
Tsuki'd to the wall

Crappy haiku copyright Berugijin.

great haiku too!!nihilistic haha

[BypeVupyide]

I'm not usually a fan of poetry, but good job ryuu!

[Vigeommighica]

Your an odd bird.

[hs6KnlcW]

His beauty is the weapon,
he uses without realisation,
to gain controll over,
my slackening defenses.

How is he to know,
with eyes so true,
that i am lost,
and not to be found,
when in his presence...

[Skete]

You guys are getting disgusting... hahaha... heh, guys... *shakes head*

Kaoru

well said.

[masterso]

Hit me with your rhythm stick,
Hit me, hit me
Hit me slow and hit me quick,
Hit me, hit me, hit me

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this poems name is "yoru no keiko"?(night practice)??
it reminds me of any nine inch nails song.

(this was a compliment) hehe

[RlUbQU3R]

hmmm...; should that one be called romantic because he talks about "her" eyes or just plain perverted because they get him horny during a keiko...
By the way, this Jude must've had a real shrieky kiai...

we all know about Gohato....
ahem , nah shes a fictional character ,




there once was a sempai called Suzuki
when she hit kote-men it was kinda flukey
she was a sado massochist who liked to safari
after keiko she would get very drunk and take of her tare
then ask the sensei to give her a tsuki -

[Pharmadryg]

Nice, verry touching ryuu! I like it

[oB8LI2kP]

Poetry is definately really touching, to the people being serious and such about it :P amazing, to me anyway hehe

[BoattyGonm]

Your an odd bird.

No, I have just found something that keeps
me trying hard

Like snow fall on winters eve
and the raindrop that falls
with grace
he will always return
and will never know....

Please, don't resort to using such a petty term as "odd bird".
I am not a feathered animal, i am a girl.

[U2DnBGFE]

There once was a kendoka called Zee
she was so hot everyone crept in the toilet wen she wanted to pee
She had large breasts that her do couldnt cover
and everyone in the dojo wanted to be her lover
untill they smelt the inside of her Gi

dont know why but I love all of your peotry!Hidoi!!!daisuki desu!please give us more!

[EzequielTMann]

Ooh poetry, lovely! My attempt:

Watch the far mountain
Try to seme for suki
Tsuki'd to the wall

Crappy haiku copyright Berugijin.

[abubycera]

Please, don't resort to using such a petty term as "odd bird".
I am not a feathered animal, i am a girl.

Hi Ryuu-San

If you genuinely are a 12 year-old Girl, then I think that your poetry is very good and you are obviously inspired... just hope that you don't set your expectations incorrectly and end up getting hurt... My daughter is 12 and I can just imagine her in that situation...

If you are not really a 12 year-old Girl... then I reserve judgement...!

There was a Kendoka named Ryuu...
Whose poems expressed love so true.
When hit on her Men...
She said 'Do that again...
...and I'll give my young heart up to you...!'

The Limerick... aaah the Irish Haiku!!!

cheers

[Gadarett]

There once was a kendoka called Zee
she was so hot everyone crept in the toilet wen she wanted to pee
She had large breasts that her do couldnt cover
and everyone in the dojo wanted to be her lover
untill they smelt the inside of her Gi

now THIS guy's got some talent ^^

[Qnpqbpac]

Thankyou Jacynth-san,
your comments are much appreciated.
Her is the next installment of the poem:

I, the lost kendoka,
Entered dojo small,
looked into his sparkling eyes,
and bled inside,
knowing that i could never tell,
would never tell,
he could never know,
may nerver know,
how i bleed.

But maybe one day,
he shall give me courage,
and he shall know,
the truth.

You go girl!!!haha..the only thing that bleeds is my veins after kote..grrrrrr~

[xresultsearch]

Hey Ryuu-San... just to let you know that my Limerick was not meant to be disrespectful... Hope that you didn't interpret it that way...

cheers

Don't worry crabbi, your poem made me smile

[Marc Spilkintin]

there once was a kendoka called Jude
when i gi keikod with her she put me in a horny mood
i saw her eyes through those grills
and my crotch suffered spills
till i took off her men and saw she was a dude