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Hey all, I decided to take the plunge and apply for the JET programme, set to leave for Japan next July. I've been working on my 'personal statement' essay and I'm asking everyone I know to read and comment on it. Some of it is obviously stolen, even from Kendo World magazine...
The essay questions are a) why do you want to do JET? b) what can you offer JET, what travel experience do you have and what problems did you have to deal with? c) in a classroom environment, how would you motivate uninterested students? I tried not to abruptly stop the essay for each question so that it flows easily, but have marked the transitions for your clarity. Here goes... My reason in participating in the JET program is to experience the Japanese way of life and to share my culture with the people I come into contact with. a)The references to Saudi AND Pakistan in the statement together. I don't have the time to get into politics, but I fit the profile to a T, all I need is a beard and a backpack. That coupled with the time in cadets makes me out to be a well trained killing machine... Perhaps I'll just say 'our family went abroad' but that obviously takes out the exotic arabian flavour. b)I've tried to demonstrate high value by saying things indirectly, i.e. telling stories and making statments (see the second to last paragraph of this post for an example) that just happen to have extremely awesome details about me in them. Still, this is a fine line, so are there any instances that obviously come accross as bragging? I still have a few cards left to play at the interview i.e. Founder of New UCL Kendo Club, and the South Africa aid project I was involved with but depending on how this essay develops I may change things around and put them in here. Advice, comments, criticisms, flames, threats, assaults welcome. |
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