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[ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nX19n0Kt1Us"]YouTube- Cracka'Jack Cluster's Spoof Advert[/ame]

We were tasked with creating a 30 second advert that advertises a fictitious cereal. Took me a week to make, but I'm pleased with the outcome.

Are You Cracka'Jack ?

As it's a new brand you've well, fabricated, I would've thought it'd be better for the advert to concentrate more on the cereal itself, rather than took about it for the last few seconds or so. It just felt ineffective. http://www.discussworldissues.com/fo...lies/frown.png

Thanks for the feedback http://www.discussworldissues.com/fo...lies/smile.png

Yeah, I have another advert to do in a group next time, so hopefully I can improve on this. This was just for a pass grade so I think it's ok for a first attempt.

On a side note, who the fuck is Nicole Atkins, DOWG?!

On another side note, use google or a PM and stay on topic.

On a "Foot-Up-Your-Ass" note, how are you going to be one way on The Shoutbox and totally asshole-worthy in this thread? Anyway, if I were to stay on-topic and speak on this advert, I'd say it was somewhat below mediocre. Not really my taste. Don't get why Rene LOL'd. It's really not effective to the cause. See Bowel Movements AKA CBM needs to get a check-up on his hemorrhoids because it's obviously a problem for him. That is all, SACHA! Jackass.....

Thanks for your insightful comments Gooey, your one of a kind. Thank god.

I didn't mean anything by it. I was just being honest. And that Nicole gal is alright. Cute. Nice voice, I suppose. Couldn't hear all that well with the sound quality being a little down. But from what I can hear, she's not half bad.

On a side note, who is George Bass, DAWG?

:advert: Music was fitting, everything else, not really.

I think you should pull a Terry Tate on the next one. Have somebody drinking that coffee then have some big guy tackle the hell outta him, splash coffee everywhere and then have him go "What's with the coffee, punk!? The best part of waking up is getting some Cracka'Jack, chump!"

The have him tackle some other guy eating some toast and have him be like "Bread and butter!? You crazy fool! You call that breffiss? THIS is breffiss! *throws a box of Cracka'Jack Clusters on the prone body* Crack-uh-Jack, chump!"

With the some experience I have with editing and the current classes I am taking on this kind of thing, I liked how you made different shots of the kitchen appliances. The only problem I had with it is it really wouldn't be believable as a commercial. Especially for that product. Because all that happens is that you do the different shots and then it goes to the graphic of the cereal for a second without really explaining the whole hub bub about it. It wouldn't make me want to buy it lol because for that split second, I wouldn't remember what it was called.

Thanx for your critiques guys. I'm sure to come up with a better idea for the next one as I'll be working in a group, plus I'll have to December 11th to really put some effort into it.

I guess it was abit obscure when I think about, like not really featuring the cereal, doh!