[TineSeign]

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[jerzeygymwolf]

Pretty darn good actually.

I like Fat Stinky Bish best though.

I didn't know Alby could rap. Well done.

[NKUDirectory]

Yea, the production quality is definitely lacking. But I wasn't expecting much in that department.

[SeLvesTr]

Pretty darn good actually.

I like Fat Stinky Bish best though.

I didn't know Alby could rap. Well done.

I also preferred Fat Stinky Bish. Just as catchy as Rack City.

[investor]

gays > fat chicks

(in the better than sense, not the 'greater than' sense)

[gambleingsites]

Still hoping one of our gay guys comes through and checks it out and tells me what they think.

You're improving. Your flow is still inconsistent and a lot of your rhymes don't work (secret/decent and demanded/marriage were especially jarring), but you had some strong sections (:20 to :48 in particular, where a solid and interesting flow makes up for some failed rhymes). Keep practicing.

[LymnInvinny]

gays > fat chicks

(in the better than sense, not the 'greater than' sense)

disagree
fat chicks can lose weight and become ****able
although gay guys are well-groomed, well-dressed men (often with lots of disposable income) who don't compete for women

hmmm i change my mind

agree

[adariseediups]

He is getting better. I still think he's in denial about the real need to improve his rhymes, but it pleases me to see that I'm not wasting my expert advice on a hopeless cause.

[Vegeinvalge]

Are you trying to convince everyone you're a homosexual in the closet?

Also, your summary of teh founding father's actions is flawed. They didn't rebel against the British to escape religious persecution.

[elapicearpisp]

Excellent non-review.

[Ecurrexchangess]

I really wanted a gay guy's opinion on this but Asher and MrFun are being jerks.


I have some other stuff up, too, rapping over the beats from Childish Gambino (Donald Glover) songs:

Heartbeat:


Freaks and Creeps:



Thank you for checking them out.