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07-07-2008, 06:20 PM | #1 |
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I love, and have a huge amount of respect for Jon. But there are moments when his grammar leaves you wishing SI would hire a personal proofreader for him.
This sentence means (at least) two different things, depending on the placement of the comma. • Having withdrawn before her second rounder with a dodgy knee, Lindsay Davenport might retire, having won her final match at Wimbledon. How many other players can say that? http://sportsillustrated.cnn.com/200....things/1.html So does he mean she won't be back to Wimbledon, but can say she won her last match there? Or does he mean she is re-retiring, and she can say she won her final match, which occurred at Wimbledon? |
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07-07-2008, 06:23 PM | #2 |
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I love, and have a huge amount of respect for Jon. But there are moments when his grammar leaves you wishing SI would hire a personal proofreader for him. |
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07-07-2008, 06:25 PM | #3 |
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07-07-2008, 06:28 PM | #4 |
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07-07-2008, 06:32 PM | #5 |
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07-07-2008, 06:35 PM | #6 |
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I love, and have a huge amount of respect for Jon. But there are moments when his grammar leaves you wishing SI would hire a personal proofreader for him. I think the comma's actually in the right place in either case, but the order of phrases is confusing. |
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07-07-2008, 06:39 PM | #7 |
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07-07-2008, 07:06 PM | #8 |
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I'm watching to see if she makes her scheduled play with WTT - Thursday and Saturday this week. I don't think anyone expects her to come back after this year. Thank goodness I buried and mourned her a year and a half ago. |
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11-07-2008, 01:30 PM | #9 |
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I love, and have a huge amount of respect for Jon. But there are moments when his grammar leaves you wishing SI would hire a personal proofreader for him. |
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11-07-2008, 02:43 PM | #10 |
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