[SOgLak]

Might I suggest that when writing articles it is not favored to show bias. Especially when opinions are so very strong along political lines. Bill Clinton, for example had a huge role in the Saddam issue...if folks remember correctly there was WMD being made by Saddam in the 90's. Clinton had the opportunity to finish Bush Sr's job too...rather he threw a few bombs at Saddam and let him continue his tyranny and genocide. But of course the UN is as much to blame as anyone...anyways... All in all, it becomes a political crapshoot. My suggestion is to omit all the bias...it isn't easy but bias can lead to lots of scrutiny to your paper. Professor or colleagues...unless of course you attend a very liberal university LOL.

Otherwise well done, you write very well

I may say more later..if I have some time..I am going out of town tomorrow for the weekend..need to pack..and take nap!

I am surprised the word extremism or extremists havent been used in this paper yet? Name a University that isnt liberal which doesnt have a religious focus to it? I cant think of any at this time but would like to know.